Rock n' Roll Queen

This is not really my cup of tea, so I wasn't really into it. However, I loved the way it was phrased and it had me hooked. I couldn't stop ...

This was very.... well there is no word for it. I can see that you tried to make it flow, but in some areas it it just didn't flow at ...

You have awesome descriptions, and very good grammar. I have to agree with KJ, and say that it was a bit confusing at some point. Other than that, you have ...

I loved this. It was very good. "If you're gonna fall in love... Do this for me; and if you're gonna dream... Don't ever leave. And if you're gonna kiss ...

Wow! I absolutely loved this. It was a tad bit repetitive, but I love what you were saying. Very beautiful. " Every rain drop that falls from this broken sky ...

Loved it! This is really good :D 'Neath the whispering trees And the light of each new day There my heart forever keeps My song when I am away. I ...

I like this story. A few lines here, and there that could use some tweaking. Example: "I've decided that walking through the halls in this high school is torture. Some ...

"Now listen very closely to the things that I will say For the sky is sort of silky, smooth; a silent loving grey, The perfect time for telling all the ...

First, Welcome to YWS :D , I'm new here as well. Second, I really liked the story, I especially loved the imagery. "The man stood there, completely at ease. The ...

All in all, it's a good poem. A few problem’s with use of words, for ex. "How can I breathe With such strong emotions Smothering me?" You should change emotions. ...

You have an amazing talent, I love the imagery, and the way you make everything flow together. :) . "Stayed by the space of rhythm and the light that scatters ...

I can see that you have good writing skills :), but you can not copy off of Twilight. It's not original, and in the end, if you want to be ...

"We make no concessions in the darkness: our bodies bare but not barren. They are what we defend in the aftermath. How being alone is still waiting to be answered ...

I loved this. I thought it was funny how the guy tried to accuse her of rapping him :lol: . You are an amazing writer. keep it up

I loved it. I thought it was really funny. :lol: Just one question, which guy did the wolf tear apart? The assassin or the hot guys?